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After reading this website, provide a full opinion about the most amazing things suggested in this itinerary. Suggest an ideal plan for a worderful experience.
Opening date: January, 13th
Closing date: January, 18th
Number of words: 70 to 80 words
http://www.visitacity.com/en/paris/itineraries/3--days-paris-top-attractions-day-1
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ResponderBorrarThis itinerary shows many wonderful places to visit that i think the most amazing to go is the Eiffel Tower, because it's one of the most recognized and romantic attraction you need to see. In addiction, it's necessary to keep in mind The Rodin Museum, since the location has the best garden and many greats scultures for a fantastic culture experience in family. Therefore, i'd like to do an ideal plan that include places like before to visit.
ResponderBorrarVALENTINA ÁLVAREZ CATALDO
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BorrarThe itinerary presents a great variety of impressive places, including the best places of Paris in short time.
ResponderBorrarFor me, the must see places are the "Eiffel Tower", it's very famous and recognized in all the world. Also, I'd like to include "The Pantheon", because it's a place with a lot of culture. Besides, it's necessary to visit "Notre Dame". And finally, I'd like to include go to the "Wine Tasting at O Chateau". The best itinerary!
Héctor González Calderón
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BorrarThe itinerary they present us the most amazing places of this city. In my opinion the best places and my suggested itinerary would be to visit: “Eiffel Tower” which measures 320 meters and It is a very romantic place, especially in the evening. Also, “Notre Dame Cathedral”, it is one the most visited site of Paris and it is in the true heart of Paris. I would also like to visit “Royal Palace”, but it is closed to the public.
ResponderBorrarABRAHAM TORRES SOTO
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BorrarThe itinerary is a useful guide about the best places to visit in Paris.
ResponderBorrarFor me, the best option to visit is the ''Eiffel Tower'', because is the most representative monument in France, a romantic place to see the twilight.
After that you can visit the Arc of Triomphe, Building to honor the Napoleon´s military
victories is one of the most popular place to visit. Finally the Rodin Museum is a good
option to see sculptures and gardens in France.
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BorrarThis itinerary shows the most amazing places you could see in 3 days in Paris. Buildings, museums, gardens and monuments represent the history of this city.
ResponderBorrarI think you have to visit the ‘Eiffel Tower’, because it’s an iconic, romantic and famous monument. Also you will visit ‘Notre Dame’, architecture it’s the most extraordinary in this Cathedral. Finally, if it’s a sunny day you would like to visit ‘Luxemburg Garden’, an incredible place to relax and go for a walk.
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ResponderBorrarOn my opinion, the best places to visit in this itinerary are: If someone travel to Paris, should visit Eiffel Tower, Arch of Triumph, because is the biggest and tallest triumphal arch in the world. Also Louvre Museum is the largest art museum in the world and here you can see “Monalisa” and “Venus de Milo”. In adittion, you can enjoy walking and viewing the landscape at Luxembourg Gardens, and visit Place du Tertre where Dali and Van Gogh lived.
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BorrarThe most interesting and amazing place that is shown in this itinerary is “Notre Dame “
ResponderBorrarBecause it’s the Cathedral with the most beautiful mosaics and it’s gargles invite you
To dream with fantastic adventures, the second place i’d like to visit in this itinerary is
“luxembourg Gardens”, because is the most beautiful garden that was created by humans
Besides this place has many types of flowers and plants like a fairy tale.
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BorrarIf you are going to travel to Paris, I suggest you go to these amazing places that, in my opinion, are the best.
ResponderBorrarFirst Eiffel Tower, it is representative of Paris and the most beautiful monument. Also Holy Chapel, it has wonderful and old architecture. Finally, Louvre Museon it’s a place where you can see classic pieces of art like the Mona Lisa.
If you go to these places, you will see the best of Paris.
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BorrarIn the itinerary you can read about the most interesting places to see in Paris in only 3 days, this is a short time to show so many places, so I recommend you go see the “Eiffel tower” and “arc de tromphe”, because they are some of the most important monuments in the world. Also, you can't miss the number one show in Paris, the “Moulin rouge” and neither the “Louvre”, which is the most important museum in France.
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BorrarThe itinerary presents a lot of places that you can visit in Paris, so I think that it is great. In my opinion the most interesting attractions in Paris are the Eiffel Tower, Notre Dame and The Louvre Museum because these are some of the most famous buildings in Europe and you can learn about culture and art. If you travel to Paris, I suggest that you start with these attractions, and then you can visit others places.
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BorrarThis itinerary shows the most wonderful places in Paris. I recommend visit “Notre Dame”, a cathedral known for its gothic architecture. Then, you can visit “Arc de Triomphe” because is the biggest arc in the world. In the evening, you can visit “Eiffel Tower” because is the most iconic and romantic place in this city. Finally, if you want to go out at night, you can visit “Place del tertre”, is known for its streets artists and its delicious cafes.
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BorrarThe itinerary has a lot wonderful places to visit in Paris. In my opinion this city is perfect because shows differents places to visit in 3 days. First I recommended visit Luxembourg Gardens, in this place you can to have a picnic and enjoy the environment, also you can go for a walk. Then I recommended visit Arc de Triomphe to know history and arquitecture of France. Finally at the night I recommended visit Eiffel Tower because this place is more romantic than museum.
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BorrarI think if you'll visit to Paris city is the best experience that you'll have, because it has the most beautiful architecture and the oldest of everything Europe. An example is The Notre Dame Cathedral and The Royal Palace. The Eiffel Tower is the biggest symbol of Paris city, you have to visit The Eiffel Tower. An ideal plan for a worderful experience is visit The Eiffel Tower, The Notre Dame Cathedral, The Louvre Museum, The Luxembourg Gardens, The Royal Palace.
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BorrarTraveling to Paris is a wonderful experience! The itinerary has many places to visit, that are some of the most popular attractions in Paris.
ResponderBorrarMy favorite places to visit are Eiffel Tower because it's the symbol of Paris, also the Notre Dame Cathedral because it's the most visited place and their architecture is Gothic, finally the Roden Museum because you can see the paintings and their beautiful gardens.
I recommend to visit Louvre Museum because it's the largest art museum in the world and has many recognized works of art, like The Mona Lisa.
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BorrarThis itinerary shows excellent places to visit in Paris, but the best places are:
ResponderBorrar Palace du Tertre, because in those apartments lived artist as Van Gogh or Dalí.
The Louvre Museum is other place people should visit in Paris, because is probably the most important and popular museum in the world.
Finally, the best place in Paris is The Eiffel Tower, because it has the perfect view of the city and because it’s the most romantic place in the world
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BorrarThe itinerary present many places amazing that can you visited. In my opinion the most beautiful place is Eiffel Tower, because is a monument in Paris and all of Europe. Also i thing you'd like visit The Orsay Museoum because it's a very old museoum and is the second most visited museoum of Paris. Also you are going to visit The Arc de Triompe because is the most popular attraction and finally i thing you'd like travel in The River Cruise and see all monument from different perspective.
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BorrarThis itinerary shows the most interesting and amazing places you can visit on Paris, in my opinion this is the best itinerary because you can go to museums and symbolic buildings.
ResponderBorrarI think the Eiffel Tower is the best place you can visit because this is the most representative monument on Paris, also is the most romantic place in the world.
Besides a good alternative at night is go for a walk, if you want see light of the city.
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BorrarThis itinerary offers the best tourist places of Paris, for example The Pont Neuf Bridge, which is Paris oldest standing bridge built in 1578. If you like wine , I recommend the O Chateau Wine Tasting, because is this is a great opportunity to have some good fun and experience some great French wine. Finally I recommend visit the Torre Eiffel, because this is without doubt one of the most beautiful monuments in Europe.
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BorrarThis itinerary is the most interesting because I can visit many places for example museums, parks, churches, but the most amazing to know is the louvre museum where Violeta Parra sang or the Eiffel tower recommended to go with your boyfriend or girlfriend bescause is a romantic place. In adittion I think that you have to visit Arch of Triumph, because this is the most famous monument in the word symbol of the napoleon´s power
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BorrarFor a wonderful experience in París I suggest to you get up early so you visit so much places as you can. I recommend you go on foot so you can see the amazing Paris's architecture. I suggest to you start for the famous "Rodin Museum", it's just 3 minutes walking from your hotel, Rodin was one of the most important sculptor in the history of art.Then, you can take a bus and go to the "Eiffel Tower" the most iconic building in the city, it's free. You will feel like in a movie, for sure!
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BorrarI don’t know Paris, but I think the best place in this itinerary is Orsay Museum, because my aesthetics professors could told me their experience in this city. If I will travel to Paris, first I’m going to visit Orsay Museum, although the ticket is more expensive than Chilean museums, because Orsay has a full collection of romanticism, impressionism, and postimpressionism paints, with Manet’s, Monet’s, Degas, and Renoir’s artworks. I’d like to visit Rodin Museum and Eiffel Tower, but I won’t have money after Orsay.
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BorrarI have never been to Paris, but I would like to travel Paris. I think that this itinerary show the best places of Paris. The most amazing places is the Eiffel Tower, because it is really big architecture, I think it is beautiful and romantic. Another interesting place is Rodin Museum, because people can know culture and a little history of the city. Finally "river cruise" is an opportunity to inform visitors about current events, exhibitions and festivals.
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ResponderBorrarIn my opinion, traveling to Paris is a wonderful experience, because the itinerary proposed is very good. I was in Paris the last years and recommend you visit the Notre Dame Cathedral.
ResponderBorrarThe Cathedral has gothic style and is biggest church the Paris.
Also I recomed visit the "Eiffel Tower" because from it you can see the whole city. Finally one the most popular attractions in Paris is the "Arc the Triomphe" because is the biggest and tallest triumphal arch in the world.
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BorrarThis itinerary presents great destinations to visit in Paris, I have never been to Paris, but I think that, the best place is the Eiffel Tower because it is an emblematic place in terms of architecture and it is very romantic too, on the other hand , The Louvre museum is the most important and interesting museums in Paris. Finally. I think the Rodin museum is an excellent place to know, because you can know the history of the city and them culture
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ResponderBorrarThis Itinerary shows the most beautiful places to visit in Paris. I think you have to visit The Notre Dame Cathedral because it’s a masterpiece of gothic architecture. Also, you should visit the Louvre Museum because it’s the largest art museum in the world. Besides, you must taste wines in The O’Chateau Wine Testing because is the best wine destination.
ResponderBorrarAnd finally, I think you have to visit The Eiffel Tower because it’s an amazing monument in Europe.