jueves, 5 de enero de 2017
Active Blog 1. Describing celebrities
Dear students,
After watching this set of celebrities, provide an opinion about stereotypes of beauty in our current society. Think about fashion and how celebrities have an impact on young people.
http://celebrityclose-up.com/
Additionally, follow the instructions below:
_Number of words: 50 to 60
_Opening date: Jan, 6th
_Closing date: Jan, 11th
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I think that celebrities shows their styles and someone follow these. For example women want blonde hair or they want be as Britney spears because she is pretty, blonde, thin, athletics, etc. Also someone be like emily ratajkowski because she is brunette. And men want blue eyes, blonde hair and be attractives for many women
ResponderBorrarBe careful with: celebrities shows"; someone follow";attractives". Check use of "s"in 3rd person.
BorrarThe stereotypes of beauty are represented by a lot of celebrities, which provide many aspects of their appareance and how the young people should be. For that reason, the social media impacts really deep into youngest persons, through celebrities publicity, photos and news. The website shows some celebrities, who always wear make-up and have big eyes, big lips and perfect hair.
ResponderBorrar(VALENTINA ÁLVAREZ CATALDO)
Be careful with: the social media"; persons"; Good job.
BorrarFamous people have an impact on society because of their beauty and success, for this now there are many people with blonde hair like, for example, Carlee Chaiken and too wear the same clothes as their favorite star.
ResponderBorrarI think that people can look like they want and if they want to look like a famous person is their decision.
Constanza Baeza Bravo
Be careful with "and too wear";
BorrarGood use of vocabulary and structures seen in class.
Today many young people follow the example of celebrities, they are imitating stereotypes of beauty, which can often cause discrimination between young people. The most of these stereotypes are given in women, where celebrities are thin, they have blond hair, also they have green or blue eyes, and they wear make-up and a variety of accessories. Thank you.
ResponderBorrarAbraham Torres Soto
Good use of vocabulary and structures seen in class.
BorrarGood job.
I think that stereotypes imposed today for the society have a great impacted on young people, because force the teen or anyone people to be that not. For example, celebrities has an important influence in stereotypes because they are considered "perfect" and the "normal" people want to be they, but under the make-up celebrities are normal people to.
ResponderBorrarBe careful with: "for society"; anyone people"; celebrities has"; to be they"; normal people to". Check use nouns and use of "s" in 3rd person singular.
BorrarCelebrities have an important impact on society, but this impact is more important on younger people, because I think they need to feel accepted by their friends. This generates stereotypes of beauty and how people should be to fit in society. Young people search identity through make-up, clothes, types of body, etc., and find it in celebrities and their looks.
ResponderBorrarGood job, because strucutures are seen in class.
BorrarThere is an attempt to go beyond in your analysis.
Celebrities mark a trend when it comes to talk about fashion, so they have the power generate different stereotypes, which can be followed by the rest of the people, whether it be women or men. This is caused by the image of beauty and success celebrities represent in society. Examples of stereotypes are blond hair, toned bodies, perfect faces.
ResponderBorrarHéctor González
Dear Hector,
Borrarit seems to me that you are using a complex vocabulary that you do not normally use.
Henry Cavill better known as Superman, is a 33 years old british actor, that in my opinion, he has the best type of body to interpret a superhero or any athletic man, because is muscular and taller than normal people, being a motivation for young men. But I think this stereotype is excessive and not healthy and doesn’t represent beauty.
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ResponderBorrarIn my opinion stereotypes of beauty that we have in our society are clearly influenced by fashion and celebrities, probably because of diffusion that exist today. Our society usually privilege some characteristics like blonde hair or blue eyes, and this characteristics are follow by young people, because they often admire celebrities like Britney Spears, Katy Perry or Henry Cavill.
ResponderBorrarCarolina González Tello
Be careful with: exist today"; are follow"; There is an attempt to use more complex structures.
BorrarGood job.
The search of identity is sometimes very important for young people. The life of many teenagers revolves around celebrities. The imposition of perfection stereotypes usually dominates the masses. Sadly the ideal leads away from human reality. This distortion just seems to take a lot of problems in young peoples, who can lose control of their lives.
ResponderBorrarBe careful with: young peoples";
BorrarThere is a try to use more complex strutures.
Good job.
In my opinion, stereotypes of beauty in our society, we can see it in celebrities, because they show us their style influencing in young people, for example make-up, clothes and accesories they wear, people copying hair color, kind of clothes and other things of celebrities, because think they are perfect and have to be like them.
ResponderBorrarGood job, because you are using strucutures seen in class.
BorrarThere is an attempt to go beyond in your analysis.
I think that stereotypes are a represent of the actual ideal beuty, for this razon, many youngs try to imitate them, this can be bad if lose them in order to be part of (they think) the cool people, this can be wear make up, tatoos, etc or to have a obsecion with color-eyes, hair or skin.
ResponderBorrarBe careful with : "are a represent of"; actual ideal beuty"; "this razon", "many youngs". There are some spelling mistakes in your entry.
BorrarThere is try to use complex structures.
The celebrities generally have an impact on young people, because they influence them with their styles, make-up, hair style and appearance. Many young people want to be tall, thin, of clear eyes and blonde. Also they want to dress like their idols or wear accessories, as big necklaces or different makeup styles, as red lips or glossy eyes, following beauty stereotypes of their favorites singers or actors.
ResponderBorrarGood job. You are using structures seen in the class correctly.
BorrarIn my opinion stereotypes of beauty depend on fashion and celebrities. Society prefers women have blonde hair, have blue eyes and they are slim. Besides, women usually wear make-up.
ResponderBorrarOn the other hand, society prefers men have masculine face and they are tall and thin. These stereotypes influence on young people to want to look like them.
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BorrarGood answer. I suggest the use of more connectors and more complex vocabulary that we have seen in class. Good job.
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ResponderBorrarI think that the mass media have an important influence today on young people especifically about fashion and celebrities, for example television creates a different stereotypes of beauty also society prefer thin and sports bodies. For this reasons teenagers want to be like famous people. Girls wear make up and different clothes and boys have tattoos or go to gym.
ResponderBorrarBe careful with "a different stereotypes"; "this reasons". Check use of singular and plural nouns, this-these. Good job.
BorrarThe society look for a false identity, because young people want to be like celebrities, they want to wear and make up like them. They thinks that celebrities are the best and more interesting than scientists or teachers. Now the beauty is based completely in physical characteristics and not in the intellectuals.
ResponderBorrar(Henry Catalán Lobos)
Be careful with: they thinks"; the beauty"; based on"; There is an attempt to use more complex structures and vocabulary.
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ResponderBorrarThe celebrities have always been icons of beauty and have an impact on young people, for example Katy Perry. She has many color hair, as blue or pink, starting the Pony Hair fashion, it’s when the hair is of many colors at the same time. Also is starting stereotypes Kim Kardashian, who has an amazing body, with latin american appearance and wears clothes many expensive and luxury. Becoming in icons
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BorrarI think the women's beauty prototype is diverse, but there’re some aspects in common. For example, blue or green big eyes, as well thick lips could also be important. Makeup is another subject, there're many possibilities there, but probably the most commonly approved is one that could help define the face, eyes and lips.
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BorrarMy opinion about the stereotypes and fashions is that before the celebrities create a trend that young want imitate for example the color of thir heir make up the clothes or daily routine, but lately this has been changing the celebrities are more natural than before in the photos of their blog we can see this change
ResponderBorrarBe careful with the language used. You are using structures not seen in class.
BorrarIn my opinion some celebrities generate negative stereotypes in our society, wich unfortunately are imitated by young people. Some are the excessive use of makeup, extreme thinness or consumption of drug and alcohol, causing that young people feel bad with themselves bacause they can’t look like famous people and generating negative actions for their health.
ResponderBorrar(Ayline Fuentes Carrasco)
Be careful with: "wich"; There is an attempt to produce complex answers. Good job.
BorrarChinsy Melin Lagos
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I think stereotypes of beauty are part of the fashion industry and it's a economic industry. Celebrities are part of that like role models, they show what the elite of fashion industry choose for us, so we can decide what buy between a few options.
The stereotypes has a big impact in young people because they represent a succesful life where you are loved and admired just because your physical beauty.
Be careful with: impact in"; Good job.
BorrarAntonio Urrutia Luxoro
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The pictures are a selection of eleven celebrities’ faces, in this selection only four faces aren’t white or occidental. Although the mass media integrate afroamerican, asian, or latino american celebrities in their pictures, stereotypes of beauty in current society discriminate bodies what appear on screen, because ideal bodies are always white, young, and thin in occidental society. In my opinion, young people copy these stereotypes in their everyday fashion.
Good job. There is an attempt to go beyond a basic opinion.
BorrarIn muy opinion stereotypes of beauty of the celebrities have a great impact, because the mass media promote then model of beatiful. For Example, the most beatiful Rihanna because has brow eyes and haird short. Them Rihanna is more interesting than Maria Carey. All celebrities is wearing make-up. Finally think this stereotypes doens't beauty innner.
ResponderBorrarBe careful with: spelling mistakes; the most Rihana";all celebrities is";this stereotypes. There ia an attempt to use complex structures.
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ResponderBorrarI think that celebrities are common people, but celebrities are more interesting than other people, because they have an extrovert look. Usually they are wearing make-up and accessories.
ResponderBorrarThe most popular actor is Sebastian Stan, He has short brown hair and he has blue eyes, He is a very beautiful person. One of his most recent films is Captain America.
Be careful with: usually they are wearing"; Good job.
BorrarBe careful with: womans"; mens"; Sometimes is hard to understand your message. Try to use more spontaneous structures.
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